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Post by Firefly on Mar 8, 2009 21:30:56 GMT -5
yeah. It looks fixed now. I don't see anything wrong with it.
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Post by elphie on Mar 8, 2009 21:32:08 GMT -5
Yeah, I fixed it. Along with the Daylight Savings Time. Thanks.
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Post by Firefly on Mar 8, 2009 21:33:59 GMT -5
Totally welcome. It is so nice to help people. Makes me even happy than I was before, which I had no clue was possible. lol
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Post by elphie on Mar 8, 2009 21:38:06 GMT -5
Check out my new av pic!! Ok, time for constructive criticism: what did you REALLY think of the story? Remember, it's only installment one. I like to leave my readers hanging.
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Post by Firefly on Mar 8, 2009 21:56:51 GMT -5
It is good, for a no real action thing. But it is still good.
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Post by elphie on Mar 8, 2009 22:22:36 GMT -5
There will be action. I'm just not there yet.
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Post by Firefly on Mar 8, 2009 22:46:30 GMT -5
I know, I know there is going to be another one. I was just saying that it was good, even though there wasn't much action.
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Post by Rikku on Mar 8, 2009 22:52:28 GMT -5
LOL and Amy good job
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Post by elphie on Mar 9, 2009 8:45:19 GMT -5
I think I'm gonna delete my post. I re-read it and I'm not happy with it. Sorry.
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Post by Firefly on Mar 9, 2009 9:46:00 GMT -5
Elphie, gosh darn it, it is fine!!! Ugh! You make things much harder on yourself when you doubt it. Do you realize that's how all my 20 other stories/poems ended up in the trash? That is why they are on a computer, in a special folder, and I am never deleting any of them. Please don't delete it.
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Post by elphie on Mar 9, 2009 14:48:56 GMT -5
I'm gonna re-work it. And yes...I'm really that hard on myself. I've already written three full-length novels, which will never see a publisher's desk. Hon, my self-confidence in in the basement with the rats.
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Post by Firefly on Mar 9, 2009 14:53:40 GMT -5
Get some self confidence woman!!! You are a good writer and if you tried hard enough, you could do some writing as a side job. A person with self confidence would probably succeed at more. I'm not bragging, but look at me. Yes, my self confidence has drifted back and forth, but I'm getting great chances. A person with self confidence would take the chances. Or maybe they just end up being a b****. I have my moments.
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Post by elphie on Mar 9, 2009 15:00:18 GMT -5
*grins* Thanks. I HAVE had my work published before, but this one isn't up to snuff.
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Post by Firefly on Mar 9, 2009 15:01:36 GMT -5
Sorry about the one word. I am just in a crappy mood cuz i'm bored and being bugged by my parents to get off. so ttyl!
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Post by elphie on Mar 9, 2009 15:04:35 GMT -5
It gets censored, so it doens't matter.
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