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Post by elphie on Mar 14, 2009 20:32:10 GMT -5
Nothing wrong with poetry! Every heard of Maya Angelou or Emily Dickinson?
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Post by Firefly on Mar 14, 2009 20:34:16 GMT -5
no. not much of a poetry reader. hehe. I wrote a poem about my *experience* last night.
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Post by elphie on Mar 14, 2009 20:37:03 GMT -5
OMG. And you say you don't need educating? MAYA ANGELOU ROCKS.
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Post by Firefly on Mar 14, 2009 20:37:54 GMT -5
reminds me of the renaissance artist.
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Post by elphie on Mar 14, 2009 20:41:04 GMT -5
*sighs* Ok, I'll google and post some of her poems on your story thread
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Post by Firefly on Mar 14, 2009 20:42:14 GMT -5
okie dokie!
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Post by elphie on Mar 14, 2009 20:48:19 GMT -5
hehe, oh wait..It's Catastian's thread that's about stories. Whoops *facepalm*
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Post by Firefly on Mar 14, 2009 20:48:45 GMT -5
it's ok.
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Post by matts on Jul 7, 2009 17:41:29 GMT -5
hey Elphie, I've been gone for a while, mostly grounded because my marks dropped bellow 75%, I read the part 2 of your story and can you please give us a e.t.a. on part 1 or part 3 or any other part your working on cause reading that was like watching one space between advertisements to a show that you missed the start of, and one suggestion for the first conversation between the mike's.
An argument, mikes dad disappeared for most of his life that must cause some things to reach the boiling point so chances are there chat is gonna have Mike say to his dad "where the heck have you been all this time, you stopped going on missions years ago." then his father would make up a reason for it... after that much time two guys don't have a heart to heart, they'll argue get pi$$ed at each other, go home and the younger mike would likely be convinced by KI3T or Sarah to try again, then they'll calm down and talk but still avoid the 5000 pound gorilla in the room.
Just a suggestion, hope it helps you to get part 1 up so I can read it.
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